A strong opening sequence is always important.
Initially it was going to be the discovery of the body at a marsh and I have already developed some ideas for a cut scene to achieve this.
Having a rethink on this and perhaps it should rather cover something more of Ron's back-story,
The shots that I have in mind are arriving at Cambridge, images of going to war, trenches, gas attack hospital bed, woman leaning over hospital bed, back to Cambridge, leaving, woman walking off hospital bed, news papers, ash tray.
This could be done in comic strip form or as a series of fades and snap-shots. They could be repriesed as memories later.
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